Wednesday, April 18, 2007

a day...


I watched as the day carefully went away…
through my empty hands… and my shattered soul..
I saw it all,
a hurt life never to crawl,
but to be taken once and for all.


I am tired... and hurt...

9 comments:

eshda3wa said...

sometimes life gets to u like that
gets too much
but you know what
when you hurt u heal
u just need to know where the pain is comming from

do0da said...

sweety i told you could have some of my pufak =P yala cheer up =)

Reem said...

*eshda3wa.. yeah bs the healing process is tough n it hurts very much!! when the pain is coming from different things, u just dont know what to do.. give up? or sleep through it :)

*do0da! looooooool i have plenty wallah!! thanks sweety.. looool wallah that did cheer me up ;)

david santos said...

Thanks for you work and have a good weekend

Reem said...

u r welcome :) thanks u too.

No3iK said...

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

reem sorry ur poem is beautiful

i couldnt help laughing after i read davids comment!!!

anyways 3mre ...i just LOVED this poem, since im feeling and living every bit of it.

u put it very simply and vividly out there.

Dakhtour said...

Hal she3r e7abe6 and i hope it's just a poam and not something real happening to u... Cheer up dear :)

Nicely written as usual :)

Reem said...

hey zizo :D ee 7adda e7ba6 ;p thanks sweety mn thouqek :)

Reem said...

no3ik!!!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
7bebty (hugzzz) inshallah life is hidin fun great happy n amazin stuff!!
thanks ;)
love u :***