yesterday I put on my empty soul,
and stared back at a fruitlessly busy life,
I loathed people, their hollowness, their aimless strife…
tomorrow I go back, strip my soul,
to watch it beautifully suffer,
as it tinges unbearable truths,
and the lies they cover…
and stared back at a fruitlessly busy life,
I loathed people, their hollowness, their aimless strife…
tomorrow I go back, strip my soul,
to watch it beautifully suffer,
as it tinges unbearable truths,
and the lies they cover…
today I wrote this poem..
fake people make me sick, please don't become one...
11 comments:
fake ppl make a joke out of themselves
laugh
dont let it get to u
If theyr faking it dont waste ur time around them ur better off with better friends and pufak comes to mind :P
Fake people are worse than zombies!
*eshda3wa!! u r right! don't worry i won't ;)
*do0da!!! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL b3d 3omri!! aham shay n pufak comes to mind hehehehehe :**
*joel! hahahahah i agree! ;)
It's easy to think of who is fake but it's so hard to think of how real we are! Ok ok i won't be wiseass. I think we should be fake because it's part of our political world. :|
this poem has a strange paradox!
it leaves with this question of: is when you wear your soul you act true, or is it without it?
i don't know maybe it is something you didn't mention! but it keeps going round and round my head :)
*x~nezitic! i don't think we should, that is exactly what's wrong with the world :) but this is what's happening anyways! thanks!
*deema!! the soul i put on in the beginning is an empty one, that goes with fake ppl, helps me observe them.. my true soul can't handle the brutality of fake ppl.. that's why i put on the empty one. thanks 7bebty :**
hello....
Reeeem!!
awalan imbarak 3alaich elshahar
second
im obsessed with def poetry these days oo i kept thinking of u
et3arfeena?
if not youtube def poetry NOW!!
very deep.
fake ppl are full of stress!
what if all the fake ppl were actually putting masks to hide from something.. and not to show something off..? just a thought:p
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