I was a wall
before you came and broke me..
I was it all
before the tears had washed me..
I ask my tears to cry me away
to strangle the fears of that void day…
before you came and broke me..
I was it all
before the tears had washed me..
I ask my tears to cry me away
to strangle the fears of that void day…
I’m counting on you to stay,
and gather what’s left of my world..
for I know that one day
I’ll make the story to be told..
and gather what’s left of my world..
for I know that one day
I’ll make the story to be told..
bye bye my love...
13 comments:
gah this reminded me of a song im sure i didnt send to u me bets ull like it leme think and send it to u later :P
aaah nice vision :) but i am still a wall :P
no one hit it but a lot of rain :) i don't think they resemble tears though :)
nice poem :)
bye bye:D
thats the story of love
did u youtube def poetry yet?
tell me what u think
im still obsessed!!
Goodbye my lover.
Goodbye my friend.
You have been the one.
You have been the one for me.
atleast look at the bright side, your not a wall any more :)
Very beautiful!! Loved it.
*do0da!! ee ee plz do sweety :*
*deema!! you go girl!! good for u!! don't let anyone bring u down 7bebty :** thanks!
*eshda3wa!! eeh.. no not yet but i'm on it ;) inshallah heheheh :*
*common_sense! hahaha well i kinda loved being a wall ;p
*sene!! thanks dear :*
3 words
-Beautiful
-Touching
-Meaningful
beautiful dear... thanks
*phoenix!! thanks dear! i'm glad u like it :D
*hitman1!! thank you! very sweet of u wallah :D
Hello, Reem!
Beautiful. Thank you.
*knock knock*
*david santos thank you very much :)
*cece!! hala wallah!
i loved this poem!
i want to be a wall!!
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