that unnamable fear
pulled me down…
to the face of earth,
so cold, so clear…
it touched my eyes,
and sheltered one more tear…
pulled me down…
to the face of earth,
so cold, so clear…
it touched my eyes,
and sheltered one more tear…
after each fall I get up.. my body colder, my heart warmer.. my soul stronger...
13 comments:
and sheltered one more tear
your poetry is always filled with good last lines in which an image comes to an end. So photographic. So good.
Wow!! Very nice!! Very good!!
I guess life is like that. You fall down, you get up...Again you fall and again you get up.
lol dam ma7ad said the obvious line and since i dont have a bufak line may i say the cliche which is
what doesnt kill you only makes u stronger :P
"that unnamable fear"
I can't believe how serious this line sounds...
I wanna ask you what it is but... I dont think you'll tell me. goodluck with what it is you're up against.
*antihero!! welcome back!!! thank u sooo much! i love last lines.. they need be good i think :)
*sene! thank u!! absolutely dear.. this is life :*
*do0da!!! b3d chbdi enta! kela fahmni ;) just had pufak btw ;p
*raven! thank you! well, sometimes many many things frighten u to the point that u don't even know what u r afraid of.. so unnamable.. thanks :) good luck to u too ;)
thats what life is about
making u stronger
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Nice piece.. Short but meaningful :)
keep it up
The best line 4 sure is that last one ;)
*eshd3wa that's exactly what i meant :**
*common_sense thanks sweety ;)
*zizo i like it too ;p thanks :D
mashalla ur talented
yala next;p
Liked it
Grazie
*بغالة thanks!
*common_sense! yallah yallah in a minute ;)
*hitman1 glad u liked it :)
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