a face moved
in a faceless crowd..
it truly proved
what I felt inside…
tick.. tock..
time came rushing through,
passing fiercely
between me and you..
there stopped the face
and stared back..
causing that careless time
to painfully crack..
in a faceless crowd..
it truly proved
what I felt inside…
tick.. tock..
time came rushing through,
passing fiercely
between me and you..
there stopped the face
and stared back..
causing that careless time
to painfully crack..
time is killing me.. I can only see you.. I miss you..
16 comments:
Feels so lost in time. Beautiful.
I think the mind gets so caught up in seeing a person you miss that it tends to put their faces everywhere, on every person that passes by..
Love how you portray your inner feelings *smiles*
Beautiful... sa7 elsanich :)
*cece! thanks!
*phoenix! that is very true.. it's hard missing someone :(
*meticulousness.. awww!! thanks! that's so sweet of u :D
*hitman1! heheh thanks! 9a7 ebdnk ;)
You reminded me of something I've wrote long ago, I'll post it soon in my blog..
*meti! oh really!? i'll be waiting for that :)
Wow!! Beautiful!! Loved it......
I really missed your thoughts....
sene!! thanks!!! missed ur blog dear :*
Hey, Reem. What's up? ;P
i hate time :r its evil
*cece! hala! mako wallah, driving away summer heat with food ;p wus up with u?
*do0da!!! it is indeed :*
Wow! I just noticed you listen to Frank Sinatra's. I thought I was the only one! ;P~
Oh. Food?! I always gain a lotta weight it summer. :/ Must get back in shape once I get to Bahrain. =D
cece! no u're not the only one ;p
ohh yeah major diet next week inshallah :D
this is a very couragous piece of yours, your starting to weive a story.. i like that, you always do moments, i like this one coz it gives us a hint about a cause or a behind the scene effect..
i don't know sorry i'm starting the "not making sense" performance :S
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