How empty and lost I am without,
my past and memories.
I'm not going to shut them out,
for they are... what I am.
How lovely is time,
we can travel in it whenever we want,
to moments extreme and prime,
to find what we once had lost.
In each life there's a bench,
where you can observe and see,
how alive life is how rich,
how wonderful it can be!
6 comments:
well congrats this is ur first october piece
and its lovely
makes u want to remember and just smile.
i think about memories alot since i suffer from the worst memory, 70% of my life i cant remember ...
i i think with out ur memory life is not worth living.
that album in our heads is all we get to keep, from every passing day
and i love sitting on benches ;)
You're not so free of the music; yet you are liberating your words. The images are well built; it was consistent to an extent, yet I have not felt the conciseness of the images very much. It is however concise if I read three quatrains separately rather than wholly as one piece (or poem).
In each life there's a bench,
where you can observe and see,
how alive life is how rich,
how wonderful it can be!
wonderful image. Work on the wording :)
hey No3ik... my only advice to u is eat z3tar and fsteq... or try to write everything from now on, bcoz memories are so presious... with a cup of rich coffee and a nice weather, remeber ur best moments, and travel there :)
Go You and Me! ;p
Hey antihero... i told u, words have been a pain in the *** lately.. hopefully i will conquer them soon :)
thanks a lot ;D
hey daydreamer... nice to have commenting on my post :D
indeed i couldnt agree more... memories r what i live for :)
thanks sweety.
Memories, time and life,
a backward sequence of dependencies; Life would make up time, hence it does build memories
so no memories, no life :D
"how alive life is how rich,
how wonderful it can be!"
=> lovely lines
:)
Oh thanks babe boy, u r sooo sweet! yeah, i just love memories, dont u? it carry me smtimes to where i wanna be... and in time inshallah i will be there again, having not the same exact feeling (bcoz i've changed) but remembering vividly what once happened... thanks choco :D
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