same old tears
cutting new paths
down that weary face…
dancing brutally with fears
of an everlasting past..
tears must fade away,
I ran out of faces…
they cannot stay,
for a faceless me…
for bright suns I reach out,
to save me from you…
my faceless self cries,
knowing it’s true:
my suns have failed me…
cutting new paths
down that weary face…
dancing brutally with fears
of an everlasting past..
tears must fade away,
I ran out of faces…
they cannot stay,
for a faceless me…
for bright suns I reach out,
to save me from you…
my faceless self cries,
knowing it’s true:
my suns have failed me…
16 comments:
im totally in love with the frist 3 lines
I was touched by your sensitive phrases.
"dancing brutally with fears
of an everlasting past.." OUCH ! :/
*do0da!! b3d chbdi wallah :*
*wild_mare. welcome to my blog :)
thanks! it means a lot to me!
"same old tears
cutting new paths
down that weary face…"
no one could have said it better :)
your "Faceless" is an amazing piece, it sorta reminded me of...
"Those who curse their look with too many faces,
The mask I wear is one." -Sting, A Thousand Years.
Talk about the awful truth..
Way to put it, dear
wow ! this is the best i read from you so far :)
the last scene is amazing !!
it reminded me of Gibran Khalil Gibran!
when the people had stolen all his seven masks, then he realized that he fell in love with the sun and wants nothing more!
reem reem
for those faces
i see none of you
i see beauty in your hiding face
beautiful fear
beautiful paths
run run
do not hide
your beautiful mask
come to me
and give it to me
i will meet you
wearing your abandoned face
(sorry i couldn't help it, you gave me an impulse)
*raven!! Thank you so much
Yeah, I’m sick of faces one sometimes has to use in certain situations.. I ran out of faces, ppl have to deal with a faceless me ;)
*phoenix!! Thanks sweety :D
*deema!! Woooooow!! That was amazing! Thank u thank u thank u!!! no more hiding, no more masks, no more faces!! I loved loved loved ur comment! Brilliant!! Thanks 7bebty :**
sun cant fail u
it always shines
u just need to look up
oh my... very nice words
Reem, I usually don't read poetry based blogs, but you're one of the rare exceptions. Keep it up
*eshda3wa! inshallah sweety, thanks! :*
*hitman1!! thanks!! that is so sweet of u! wallah it means a lot to me :)
Very nice.
I miss writing poems and reading 'em. Post more of these stuff.
Too simple yet wonderfully written =)
I suggest you write a poem about sushi! :P
*sara shuaibi.. thanks! and LOOOL yeah i'll do that ;p i loooove sushi!! yumi ;p
*meticulousness.. thanks a lot! :D
Fine then. :P Will wait for the sushi poem. ;)
sara!! hehehe ok ;p
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