Tuesday, July 03, 2007

shadows


it all happens at night…
the shadows of yesterday’s morning climb to the top..
blue, naked, deprived of light,
they just don’t know how to stop..

I cover my eyes,
and I see them no more.
yet I hear their longing cries,
asking me for more…


the shadows are asking me for more pain, more sufferings, and more tears… ugly shadows take all u need…

7 comments:

phoenix said...

Shed some light on them.. show no fear, just happiness. They usually go away

Hamad said...

wow... I can really relate...
I think I know what it feels like to have something eat away at you... slowly... until it takes it's toll on you... yet you still cope and take it on... atleast thats what happens when you're convinced it wont go away... but hey.... thats life... isn't it? o_O

this one sends shivers down my spine.. sent me into a deep trance...

ma 3alaih reem.. I truely believe that someday, SOMEONE IS gonna make your shadows go away!

Deema said...

the shadows are taking what you need; pain, suffering and tears.

mmm as if you actually gave out alot of that in the morning and the shadows are coming at night to get what was left for you..

reem

beautiful.. beautiful :)

Reem said...

*phoenix! they actually do go away after taking what they need.. thanks 7bebty :*

*raven! that is life! 9a7! thanks sweety.. i believe in that too :)

*deema! yeah.. they come in the morning n night too.. won't leave me alone.. how sweet of them aye? ;p
i'm glad u liked it :*

Silver said...

beautiful poetry

Silver said...

beautiful poetry

Anonymous said...

I love this!