Monday, June 25, 2007

the day you left...


I picked up your steps as you were leaving,
and hid them away with my tears believing,
that one day I shall hold you again…

I keep the memories you gave me warm in my chest,
wishing to live and die looking and hoping for the best.

10 comments:

phoenix said...

Memories have a special place in a human.. Right in the Heart!

KJ said...

It is hard to watch someone you adore leave.

Deema said...

I picked up your steps as you were leaving
i love this line

you have very short poems!
ana ya g9aaar ya 6waaaaaaal ;)

let us believe a bit longer :)

thank you :D

Reem said...

*phoenix! yeah and memories are all we have to remember those who left :*

*kj! absolutely..

*deema! awww thanks! i love it too ;p
they just come short i can't control it ;p i used to have some longer poems in the past..
thank you 7bebty :D

do0da said...

u wrote something with a hint of optimisim wow :P beats the sad poems :P

Reem said...

hey do0da! thanks sweety! well, i'll be back with sad poems before u know it ;)

eshda3wa said...

reem intay ur amazing

i really like this poem

the void left behind by a person
one of the worst feelings in the world

Reem said...

eshda3wa!! thanks 7bebty (blushing) ;p
it is the worst indeed :**

Eva said...
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Eva said...

Been there
been in your lines
walked that line
...