Tuesday, October 23, 2007

crumble




going back in time,
I found that unbearable silence..
was it my fault? my crime?
to be just me?

here.. please hold my world..
for I just want to crumble and cry..
I want that tear, rigid and cold..
to crawl on your cheek and die...

20 comments:

Anonymous said...

its not a crime to be just you..
but apparently ppl love compliments and fake acts..


a tear helps sometimes :(

eshda3wa said...

girl that is just painful!

love u :**

Reem said...

*fantasia! 7bebty.. i agree 100% ppl r just idiots :*

*love u too 7bebty :*

Pearls said...

wow mashala i love it :D

Deema said...

think it a hint from time not to go backwards :)

a smile while the tear is going down has more beauty
and shows childhood strength

Reem said...

*pearls welcome to my blog! thanks 7bebty! im glad u loved it :*

*deema!! yeah u r right! tears make me feel better, i love them!
thanks sweets :*

Hitman1 said...

Another good one.... keep up the good words coming

Reem said...

hitman1!! thanks sweety! i will ;)

Pearls said...

woow beautiful chan zain agdar akteb chethi !!!!

phoenix said...

There's nothing new to be said.. You're never seize to write beautiful pieces:D

Hitman1 said...

very sad... nice piece

Anonymous said...

So "Evanescence". Not bad though... =)

No3iK said...
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No3iK said...

helloooooooooooooooo

rayooooomi :****

girl .. there is nothing u could ever do.. that wont be right!

trust me :**

beautiful piece like always.

missed ur place.

eshda3wa said...

miss u :(

GND said...

Loving it =D

Deema said...

hello reem, it is something about the world, that you gave it to your receiver, that it really makes me think.. it feels so light .. but the following words bring a lot weight to it, as if you trick that receiver.

Resalah said...

its not a crime! ..3endy Quote my Friend kela tgolha .."never apologize for being me" ..

Resalah said...

Btw , Madre Eshlon Dakhlt ur blog. w ana tawny new .. fa hath my first comment ;P

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